I had a wonderful opportunity to write a poetic response to my Serbian friend, Jelena Bogdanovich’s poem through Facebook. I sensed what it’s like to do back-to-back poetry, much like wrestlers do with tag-team wrestling. I am reminded of tag-team evangelism on the streets of Chicago years ago with friends. We would take turns, have a go at it, and then, pass the mic on to the next person, who would add from where the last person left off.
It seems to me that Tag Team evangelist poets wrestle with God, but with words.
Here is Jelena’s poem:
JAZZ FOR THE BONES OF THE LOCUST TREE
You're the rain that falls on my bones
Of the locust tree;
A pearl, on my most fragile joints.
So, You are playing jazz
On Your giant contrabass
With the percussions
Of rain
In the background
You know very well
I would not believe You a word
Today, so you come as a music
Soaking my ground:
"Girl,
I'm not ashamed of your humanity..."
And here is mine along with one of my paintings:
HORSE CAT TREE
expressed jazz moans
the bassist plays with
the chambered cry
more like a wail
It seems to me that Tag Team evangelist poets wrestle with God, but with words.
Here is Jelena’s poem:
JAZZ FOR THE BONES OF THE LOCUST TREE
You're the rain that falls on my bones
Of the locust tree;
A pearl, on my most fragile joints.
So, You are playing jazz
On Your giant contrabass
With the percussions
Of rain
In the background
You know very well
I would not believe You a word
Today, so you come as a music
Soaking my ground:
"Girl,
I'm not ashamed of your humanity..."
And here is mine along with one of my paintings:
HORSE CAT TREE
expressed jazz moans
through loans from various sourcesin soulful tones
like trees,
like cats,
and horses
the bassist plays with
a bow across the stringsexpressive ways
and the wooden bass sings
the chambered cry
of a felled tree
no wonder whybut i feel free
at cost of
horse, cat, tree
more like a wail
it weeps without fail as
sounds so lowhorsehair bow brings
from catgut strings
— Tony Mujica © 2012causing my heart's glow
The Bassist (Portrait of Eberhard Weber) Oil on Canvas 14" x 18" |
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